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News_From_Nowhere
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since 2002-06-14
Posts 173
CU, NY

0 posted 2002-07-29 02:11 AM


Brave shining heroes
conquered the new world
Leprechans own the wishing wells
I truly believe this
holding my bronze shoes

Deep down inside, I believe there's a
magical spirit roaming this land of hell
we call earth... Maybe it's through reality
Maybe it's through fantasy
Maybe through both

Call yours truly dumb or naive if you want
Because I know I'm not
I know who I am and exactly where I stand
And more than anything, I know my life is
more interesting than most, because of these eyes
I see through

"So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm

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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-07-29 02:25 AM


I believe this is the first I've read from you--and on a good day? This would be my anthem.

I like the spirit of this--well written with a defiant sort of whimsy...I look forward to reading more. (OH. Welcome!)

Purity
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since 2001-11-20
Posts 526
Once Upon, USA
2 posted 2002-07-29 02:37 AM


Still, the fantastical way you script your poems keep me in awe. This was such a poeticly correct response to someone questioning your intelligence. Brave shining heros...and you're still holding those bronze shoes...Loved this one!
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