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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn 
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Son of a bitch I know that son of a bitch and I know that son of a bitch wants me Wants me to laud him Praise him Sing his psalms Serve fealty unto him The rat bastard wants me and the rat bastard wants my validation and veneration He tells me this as he takes my sight He tells again as he takes my strength And whispers it as he takes my breath The black hearted fiend woos and seduces me taunts and threatens And he knows that he will prevail And he knows that he’ll have his due What he doesn’t know is that when it’s finally my time to pay up he’d better bring some friends ~wranx The shortest distance between two points... |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
hail yea-uhhh! can ah git a witness don't take no stuff from no Mista D wranx --- tooth and nail, brother umm-hmm BS. I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
um...you *are* on my side, right?? this is some down-right nasty stuff..and? I LIKE it... *bad* temper man...sure we aren't related??? grins~~ Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
 Nice devil/death/mortality complex here, wranx.  She said burn ... together. |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
i like this because it works works two ways... i didn't realize that til i read the other replies.... the rage is very potent. enjoyed. it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown |
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News_From_Nowhere Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173CU, NY |
It twould seem there ta be a most abundance of these types, eh? Nice, blantant writing here Wranx, and a breath of fresh reality from all of the "let's maintain a theme". Total congrats to you on this one. I don't like challenges. I like poems that challenge life. This one does. 'nuff said. "So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
TOUCHE', SENOR! If only I could have penned this one for all those so called friends... Blatant, but so enjoyed! |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Thanks, Peeps I was just kinda (annoyed) at the way I've been stalked by this thing lately. ~wranx [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (07-31-2002 03:47 PM).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
*whispers conspiratorally* Psst, wranx. S.o.b. came under brief fire in the Deputy Moderator's forum regarding the poem's use of language. Luckily, in the context of the poem's potent rage, the wording has made it through the battle unscathed (phew). However, posting similar language in yr recent reply might give some people the grist they need to close this down. In other words, you meant to say something *annoyed* you, didn't you? (i'll take care of it) Mikey Said if I only could ... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Squirrel dude, once again, you have chosen the EXACT word for a given context. (I must get a thesaurus). You are one talented rodent. Thanks for the suggestion. ~wranx The shortest distance between two points... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Glad to help, wranx. Said if I only could ... |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Well done, Mikey, and Wranx. Powerful poem Wranx, and great work Mikey. Sincerely, Titus "They say that a hero can save us. I'm not gonna stand here and wait..." |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Poetryislife, The squirrel dude and I thank you. (I know how to ride coat tails) ~wranx The shortest distance between two points... |
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