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shadowchild458 Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 117MN,USA |
hiding emotions just never worked for me and i've tried so hard just to hide the scars but in the end you'll see them clearly just look at my heart the damage underneath is just too hard to beleive and so i'll try again to hide my feelings for your sake i love you friend and the time goes by and it's hard to see just what's inside my mind what's gonna happen to me? and i can't even tell one thing from the next i'm so mixed up my mind is just a mess so when the light goes out and you see me no more just remember me as the girl who couldn't find the door i don't know how this happened to pour out of my head but it's a little messed up and i apologize for that. i guess that's what i get for trying to write a normal poem after reading someone else's rap. life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
hmm... I'm not positive what it's about... maybe about you? Maybe not. Overall, though, it was a wonderful poem. Keep writing... (oh yea... have fun at camp) *hugs* -Sara "Without you, without you, everything falls apart. |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Hmm... I still love it!! You're at camp, I'm here... alone, bored. No one's ever on aim. This is soooo boring. I guess i'm reading all your poems over again, and getting a feel that you're here... at least trying to. I wish I could just have another stupid conversation with you about how stupid "p.p.o.p." is, and how cool songs are. I miss my friend!!! Well, i hope you're having fun... this better be worth it. lol (i feel erased...  )Well, see ya around. lylas! -Sara You said you knew me enough to love me. |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
HeeHee... Still reading all your stuff. Hmm... i'm pretty bored. I made a new friend, she's kind of like us. I think I got her to post here.  I keep bringing 'em in! ha...Soooo.... Still a very good poem. Very good...very. very bored. Well, ttywugb. (talk to you when you get back) which i hope is very soon. I'm not counting days. but i hope it's been 3 weeks. Anyway, ttyl. -Sara  ^^me... OMG calvin is getting on my nerves... i talked to my stupid neighbor about him, (really preppy) and she was talking about how age is such a big deal, when the girl HE likes is 2 years younger than him. I want to hit him with something sharp... well not really. That'd be mean. I don't hurt people. GOD WHY WON'T I SHUT UP!? i'm just talking to myself. Gosh, well hurry back, be carful. lylas -sara They say things never would've worked out anyway... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
It's good to have a best friend.Anyway, Abby, I really like what you've done here. The little nugget of hope within all the "mess." Mike |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Join the club don't worry about how messed up you feel if you want to write then do. Cos I glad you did, I feel like that sometimes and its nice to kno I'm not the only one. But hope you can get it together soon.If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
hm... "Your suffering will free you." |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Um..what can I say? I LIKE the mess!! *big wink* Never critisize emotion when it wants to pour from your pen!!! You've got it right and you've let it out...so go from there... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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