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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2002-07-25 05:21 PM


R unning down a deep corrider,
O r be afraid of the dark,
L ight will be swallowed up,
L ending you no second chances,
I ce doesn't melt in these corners,
N ither does the fire cease to burn,
G etting out isn't in your fate,

O pen doors will lock you in,
N ever may you scream again,

T welve o'clock and midnight,
H ate to bask in warm sunlight,
E ventully I'll spead my wings

L iving day by day you rot,
A ngry Voices in your head,
U se of your legs are paralazed,
G ot your fear to live off,
H aunting your every move,
I Darkness will cover you,
N owhere for you to hide,
G etting out isn't your fate,

F alling slowly, swifty falling,
L osing all your sanity,
O ver nothing in the dark,
O pen and the light pours in,
R eturning from the surreal.



If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

[This message has been edited by Moon Dust (07-25-2002 05:25 PM).]

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bsquirrel
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1 posted 2002-07-25 06:05 PM


Hey, you tricked me!

If that's cheating ... I like it!

She said burn ... together.
-TON

wranx
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2 posted 2002-07-26 12:07 PM


Tricky...and creative
Nice imagery

~wranx

The shortest distance between two points...
is sometimes, intolerable.      

Bukowski

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3 posted 2002-07-27 08:14 AM


Your right I'm cheat

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

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