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Dark Poetry #3

The Edge

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

0 posted 2002-07-24 11:05 PM

(This, aslo is very old.. and long.. thanks in advance if you read it)

The Edge
I’m getting far too close,
I can feel the temp. drop,
I can feel my back pop
o, oh

Tomorrow you will come and I will hide from you.
So you cannot make me!
Soon I’ll be
Falling off the edge straight into the hedge of spiked bushes.

Please brush me aside you’re killing me inside
Just push me one more time and I will fall of the edge,

I'm coming far too close.
I can feel my mind slope,
I have lost all hope.
o, oh.
Looking off the edge I see my life down there.
Now I'm starting to cry.
Soon i'll be,
Jumping off the edge, just so i can get away

Please brush me aside, you’re killing me inside
Just push me one more time and I will fall off the edge.

I want to live my life alone,
Alone without you.
I don’t need your help for anything at all.
Just let me make my choice,
And my choice is this. . .

Please brush me aside,
You are killing me inside
If you push me one more time I will fall of this edge.

You live your life and I’ll live mine.
If you don’t leave I’ll make you.
Now leave me be.
I’m not asking you,
I’m telling you.
So stay away!!!
Just brush me aside,
You’re killing me inside,
You’re poising my mind.
if you push me one more time I will fall off the edge.
Stop trying to live through me,
Stop it I’m me. . .
Stop it be yourself.
Stop it you won’t change me.
Stop it, you’re making a fool out of your self.
Making a fool out of yourself
Not me. . .

I’m getting far too close
I can feel my back pop
I can feel the temp. drop
...

"Without you, without you, everything falls apart.
Without you, It's not as much fun to pick up the peices." -NinceInchNails

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

1 posted 2002-07-25 12:05 PM

interesting poem. I liked it more than your other ones.

Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.)

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