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MomentzBefore Junior Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 31 |
Black are shadows behind the dark And it sorrounds me with deep thoughts Black is darkness covering the light Black is a color full of fright Hiding behind my eyes Black reprensents part of me Keeping me away from what I reach Black is a feeling Espressed in tears Black is a crow flying across the sky Leaving me with silent goodbyes Black is the sky when it becomes night Black is the feeling That sometimes I hold inside |
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MomentzBefore Junior Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 31 |
oopps....I have some mistakes....sorry about that :-) _susan_ |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
I really like this! It's so creative. Black's my favorite color, but I never thought of making a poem about it. All of it's so true also... I'll have to tell ShadowChild about this... she might like it. Keep writing, Susan. I'll keep repling.  -Sara "Without you, without you, everything falls apart. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Black can be beauty presented in dream can soothe as a raven in highest esteem... Have not had the opportunity to welcome you properly...terrible me!!! enjoyed your ponder lady!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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shadowchild458 Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 117MN,USA |
 wonderful wonderful wonderful! i loved it! absolutely loved it! black is such a cool color/shade and it's so incredibly inspiring!  life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
woah it so gud it inspired me 2 write about black thanx If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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