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shadowchild458
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since 2002-07-10
Posts 117
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0 posted 2002-07-23 11:34 PM


i hurt myself
with the pieces of your soul
the glass you left behind
when you killed yourself
and i can feel the anger
kept inside them
and in a trance the blood drips
and i can here it fall
to the floor
and i know at once
why you did it
your feelings flow through me
i know how you thought,
i know how you felt,
i know exactly why you acted
and your blood is now mine
and the death you once breathed
and then shattered into truth
is now my truth, my way, my light
and i know that all i want to do
is take the path that you chose
for if i don't, i will cry
cry tears of blood
until my veins are dry
and they will say
"look at that girl,
she cried her heart out!
she should have just took
the easy way out! she should
have just killed herself
from the beginning!"
and so pierce my soul
and the blood drips
and i know what you felt,
when you cried out in pain
and we came running
only to find you dead on the floor
same situation
same reality
same world
different soul


ispired yet again by PoeticGoddessOfDepression
my little poetry buddy (lol) thanks again sara!

life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait

AKJ

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PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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since 2002-07-02
Posts 439
I am everywhere
1 posted 2002-07-23 11:43 PM


"same situation
same reality
same world
different soul"

Ahh! I'm so glad I'v inspierd you!  Otherwise i'd have never read this!
I love it!!!
Another i'd adding to my library!

It's strange how the word 'reality' is showing up a lot in our poems...
hum...

anyway.. keep posting!!

bye bye

-Sara

"With poetry and suffering, I cannibalized every ounce of my pain"
-Otep

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