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Anvrill
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since 2002-06-21
Posts 710
in the interzone now

0 posted 2002-07-23 08:36 PM


This is really, really old. Just can't get it out of my head. Augh, certainly shows where my mind keeps jumping to.



Why did you have to die?
In silence you lived,
now in silence
you lie beneath the ground,
where only the worms and maggots
can talk to you
and you can't talk back.
Because all is still.
Forever.
All is still.

Why did you have to die?



-Lori-Anne
Once more that hurt li'l girl. Don't even know why.

written in blood before everything went black

JCV

© Copyright 2002 LL Hager - All Rights Reserved
PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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since 2002-07-02
Posts 439
I am everywhere
1 posted 2002-07-23 11:54 PM


very tragic...
but i did enjoy it.
the loss of a loved one can hurt so much...
i'm sorry,

-sara

"With poetry and suffering, I cannibalized every ounce of my pain"
-Otep

bsquirrel
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2 posted 2002-07-24 12:17 PM


I remember that one (if I remember, it came off a poem of mine about finding *you* buried under the ground) God, let's quit this mood -- together. *kiss* I love you so much, baby. I'm here for y'.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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