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0 posted 2002-07-23 01:00 PM


I... feel... I'm silly...to have chosen you.
I... feel... I'm a fool... to dream of you.
I... should have listen... to advice that... have given me.
I... should have known... all along... that I mean... nothing... to you.
I... should have known... that we are... the pole... of each end.


Why I did... trust your words...
Is still a question... I blame myself.
Why I did... in love with you...
Is still a question... I want to know.


Why I even... care for you
Is still something... I regret...
Why I even... think of you
Is still something... I wonder...

Eliza Simmons
~He is amazing regardless how we feel.
~He is amazing because He cares us regardless our beliefs.

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1 posted 2002-07-24 01:18 AM


I know how you feel. But one must not confuse the past good times  with the current bad times. Good poem...

Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.)

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