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a little glass of sanity
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a little glass of sanity |
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shadowchild458 Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 117MN,USA |
morning i wake up have a little glass of sanity keep me going and i don't know what i'm doing watch a little bit of reality take a nap dream of fate noon i wake up have a little glass of sanity talk to people i don't know life is an illusion in a world of denial take a nap dream of hope evening i wake up have a little glass of sanity sulk in sorrow the day's almost done i'll never amount to anything ever the world knows it and they hate me go to bed dream of faith midnight i wake up have a little glass of sanity walk the streets in hopes of coming across my good friend death and morning waits and the moon shines reality was never clear you could watch it all your life and never understand it until you become part of it wake up have a little glass of sanity life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
And it's life... You're written this so well. It's so true, and that's the sad part. I'm going to put this poem in my library. I think I've fallen in love with this poem! Lol  Never change, SC, never change. "reality was never clear you could watch it all your life and never understand it until you become part of it" ...I think I have an idea ... it'll probably suck, but I'll enjoy your criticism!!! Keep it up, Sara "And I feel your heart beat/Pounding in my head/I'd like to control you/Cuz I can't control myself." -GreyDaze |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
interesting piece...I liked it much. Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.) |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
Your transitions here were great, and I loved this piece! Well woven! However, I hope that your good friend death finds himself too busy to come visit for quite a number of years! Awesome poem, shadow... |
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shadowchild458 Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 117MN,USA |
lol thanks purity and thanks xeonox i enjoyed your comments. life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait |
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shadowchild458 Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 117MN,USA |
oh yes and i forgot, thank you sara too... life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait |
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