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Anvrill
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since 2002-06-21
Posts 710
in the interzone now

0 posted 2002-07-23 11:45 AM



You hurt me.

A drop of blood
five years old
on a paper I never saw.

Why do I have to
feel today?

It was escaping.
But with it,
you would have gone.

Why do I have to
feel today?

A drop of blood
five years old
on a paper I never saw.

You hurt me.



*sigh*



written in blood before everything went black

JCV

[This message has been edited by Anvrill (07-23-2002 12:19 PM).]

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shadowchild458
Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 117
MN,USA
1 posted 2002-07-23 12:11 PM


Why do I have to feel today?

i've always wondered that...

Anvrill, another wonderful poem. i love reading your poetry since you always put such power in the words of your poems making them not words but feelings. another great one. keep writing

life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait

AKJ

bsquirrel
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

2 posted 2002-07-23 02:34 PM


And now, somethin' from the Mikey file:

Living in the past is useless, and sucks.

I was doing it myself last night.

I've been doing it for a few days, actually.

Closure would be nice, huh? *hug*

She said burn ... together.
-TON

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448
Universal Mind
3 posted 2002-07-23 03:36 PM


I like the poem

Eliza Simmons
~He is amazing regardless how we feel.
~He is amazing because He cares us regardless our beliefs.

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