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shadowchild458 Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 117MN,USA |
if anybody ever listened to the words i say would they notice? i speak no lies if anybody ever saw me while i'm crying would they notice? the tears are real if anybody ever tasted the blood i bleed would they notice? i want to die if anybody ever cared about how i feel would they notice? sorrow is my best friend no, no to it all i'm too happy to cry the wouldn't notice something's wrong life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
This is a cold and uncaring society now, Still someone might notice somehow. When it comes to friends one of mine is sorrow, Another is the dark of night and the land of shadow. Gloom |
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shadowchild458 Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 117MN,USA |
i'm totally with you on that one. shadows are my friends and i dance with them every night  life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Professor Gloom couldn't have said it better, Abby. I loved your poem. No one really cares about anyone... it's sad, how the world and all of what's on it is crumbling. I wish you the best of luck! Keep 'em comin! -Sara (sorry it took me so long to reply to your poems) "And I feel your heart beat/Pounding in my head/I'd like to control you/Cuz I can't control myself." -GreyDaze |
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