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Anvrill
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since 2002-06-21
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in the interzone now

0 posted 2002-07-22 09:57 AM



And in your arms, love,
I feel nothing anymore.
Your darkness seaps slowly
in through my skin,
unravelling
and searching,
touching tentatively,
holding me still
in your gentle embrace.

written in blood before everything went black

JCV

© Copyright 2002 LL Hager - All Rights Reserved
wranx
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
1 posted 2002-07-22 11:52 AM


Lori~
your poetry seems to be tempered, some what, by your new and improved situation.

I liked this ALOT.


~wranx

I have great faith in Humanity...It's just most of the Humans, I'm not too keen on.     E.F.Rose

bsquirrel
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2 posted 2002-07-22 11:52 AM


............................

huuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuh!

Love you.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

devina
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Cali
3 posted 2002-07-22 04:01 PM


ah...sweet darkness...

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



Anvrill
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Posts 710
in the interzone now
4 posted 2002-07-22 10:28 PM


Y'know, I actually have no clue what this means. The first two or so lines were running through my head at work, so I desperately searched out a pen and paper, and this is what happened. Needless to say, the new girl I was training wondered what the hell I was doing.

Thanks, all.

And Mike, yr way too easy to floor, babe.

written in blood before everything went black

JCV

bsquirrel
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5 posted 2002-07-23 12:08 PM


Isn't that one thing you love about me? Um ... no comments.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Anvrill
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since 2002-06-21
Posts 710
in the interzone now
6 posted 2002-07-23 12:18 PM


No comments, indeed.

I love you, baby.

written in blood before everything went black

JCV

bsquirrel
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7 posted 2002-07-23 02:29 PM


I love you too.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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