Blood & Rainbows challenge

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devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

0 posted 2002-07-21 11:44 AM

Blood & Rainbows

blood reluctant in veins
as I reach
the precipice
of you

stumble fall of recognize
I remember
what it was like

Your rain bows
my control
in strides of dark
as I sidle up
to your side

So close

I can smell your
excitement
from the depths
of porous elation

Weak as kitten fear
I seduce a kiss
in tempt
of me-
not to be
disobliged
in sentiments of you

Emotion runs so colorful
as shatter remnants
stick me together
in your arms

Blood soars
to heights
of
rainbow simultaneous
and I drown
to die this way…

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

1 posted 2002-07-21 03:02 PM

HOLY (stuff)! This is awesome! And y' even mentioned kittens!

She said burn ... together.
-TON

MIdsummerRain
Member

since 2002-05-19

Posts 175
St. Louis, Missouri

2 posted 2002-07-22 01:12 AM

"...Blood soars
to heights
of
rainbow simultaneous
and I drown
to die this way..."

Sensual & Excitingly Beautiful ~Rayne

For in much wisdom is much grief
& he who increases knowledge
increases sorrow...
Eccl. 1:18

MidnightSon
Member

since 2002-05-15

Posts 312
between the gutter & the stars

3 posted 2002-07-22 07:54 AM

blood boiling words....
wow.
i been tryin to figure out a response to this challenge and now i'm just jealous.

this was vivid and steamy...

it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown

BrandeeM
Junior Member

since 2002-05-01

Posts 45

4 posted 2002-07-22 04:03 PM

You've said it vixen...and said it good!!!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2002-07-22 04:55 PM

ahhhhh. . . I can see it. . . yes. . . who would have thought???

great work you. . . I like being back. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

6 posted 2002-07-22 08:04 PM

Stroke, stroke...

*chuckles*
~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

shadowchild458
Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 117
MN,USA

7 posted 2002-07-23 12:17 PM

I can smell your
excitement

very excited???

great poem i loved it
defidently on of the best i've read here by you
(haven't read very many of yours)
lol

life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait

AKJ

Anvrill
Senior Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 710
in the interzone now

8 posted 2002-07-23 12:23 PM

Aw... Kittens.

"and I drown
to die this way..."

Might I say, one of the greatest set of closing lines I have ever, ever, ever, ever seen.

written in blood before everything went black

JCV

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