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Dark Poetry #3

An undying twist of faith

Broken
Member

since 2000-03-12

Posts 271
The woods

0 posted 2002-07-20 06:30 PM

AN UNDYING TWIST OF FAITH

As I close my eyes
I still see the same
You

Your dark blue eyes
As lively as
When

But still a dream
Still you sleep
Still I love
Still I weep

This pain
Will never
End

This pain
Is my
Own

[This message has been edited by Broken (07-20-2002 06:36 PM).]

Purple Poet On Wheels
Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 145
Pittsburgh/Edinboro, PA

1 posted 2002-07-20 08:03 PM

Simple words can be the most powerful

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

2 posted 2002-07-20 09:55 PM

I really liked this. It was short, and to the pointish. (lol)
These words seem so familiar to me.
You're quite talented, and I'm glad you share that here with the other talents, but your verses stand out...
I hope you will provide me with more.

Keep your writing alive.

Sara

If we follow the invisible line of hatred, it will lead us straight to our hearts..... and pierce.

[This message has been edited by PoeticGoddessOfDepression (07-20-2002 09:56 PM).]

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

3 posted 2002-07-20 11:22 PM

Broken,
I love the rueful, written right.

This is such

~wranx

I have great faith in Humanity...It's just most of the Humans, I'm not too keen on. E.F.Rose

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