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Scrambled Night
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Scrambled Night |
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News_From_Nowhere Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173CU, NY |
Scrambled night, scrambled night work your emotions bring machine minds to face Scrambled night, scrambled night work your emotions bring music to this place Scrambled night, scrambled night work your emotions your poetry at pace Scrambled night, scrambled night work your emotions show your black flowered lace Beautiful trees and grass for clothes Natural softness of the oceans flow Your sweet caress of the worlds romance Your greatest weapon I worship your lance Butterfly heart, butterfly heart propelling pictures from my mind I've cherished you from the start "So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
So much said, with such fine use of rythm and rhyme. Yours truly ~Broken~ The unfathomable hell within, |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
A thoughtful and well constructed work Good, News ~wranx I have great faith in Humanity...It's just most of the Humans, I'm not too keen on. E.F.Rose |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
beautiful, news. caused me to read your others, which are all great! this one sounds as is if should be recorded as a song! just reads so gosh darn well, yet your deviation is impeccible. great work of art! |
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