Dark Poetry #3 |
Want, long, burn, need |
bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I want to make love to you among flowers and thorns, so I feel your softness even as I bleed. I want to kiss your pain away with the words we speak; but if I cannot, I want to share that pain. I long to see your smiling face clouding in the sky. So when I'm alone, the rain falls for me. I long to see your cloudy arms spread across the sea. Touch the tips of ships, the tips of waves. I burn to find the sunlight across your darkest days. And to find the moon among your bravest nights. I need to marry you, Lori, and always be home. So husband and wife can learn to laugh and cry. She said burn ... together. |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Very Romantically Beautiful...Lori and Mike you two are very lucky to have found a love such as this....You two are great poets and very special souls. Beautiful poem... DeaDiAmore |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
*thump!*
written in blood before everything went black |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks, D.D. Amour. (That reminds me of DeeDee Ramone -- R.I.P!!!) And baby, that whole post y' sent was beautiful and sexy and ... I laughed out loud when I read that the package is as long as your torso! God, I love you. Mikhail, fur immer und fur ewig She said burn ... together. |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
Aw, c'mon, it's "fur immer und ewig"! Fur immer und ewig, es ist immer fur dich. If Robert Smith spoke German, he'd be ashamed. "For always and ever, it's always for you. Your trust, the most gorgeously stupid thing I ever cut in the world." Ah, the romance of Cure. But the first line is so beautiful... And gorgeous is another one of his catch words, isn't it? So... Christmas. Kiss. Fur. Gorgeous. An excess of quotes/dialogue. Anything I'm missing? written in blood before everything went black JCV [This message has been edited by Anvrill (07-19-2002 04:14 PM).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Mouths. And cats. She said burn ... together. |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
Well, mouth and kiss are the same territory. But yeh, cats are there a lot. I still have this nagging feeling that I'm missing something on the list-o'-Smith. I mean, I know some albums have their catch words. Like Pornography is caught up on eyes and aging. The Top mentions pigs more often than you'd expect from anyone who isn't Trent Reznor. Stuff like that. OH! And Robert Smith has said dreary a total of two times (that I noticed), which makes it two more times than I've ever heard anyone else actually seriously use that word. So he's the evil fiend who attached that word to goth in the first place! Yeah, there's dreary in Prayers for Rain and in Doing the Unstuck (though it's in a positive light: "It's a perfect day for letting go/for setting fire to bridges/boats/and other dreary worlds you know./Let's get happy!"). Maybe more. I will go read allll the lyrics this fine band presents us, and report back. And no, I'm not avoiding sleep, not at all! Love you, baby. written in blood before everything went black |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Get some sleep, my adorable grrl. She said burn ... together. |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
Baby, write me a Cure poem! A list of very Smith-like words: again and again, age, alone, art, beg, bird, bite, blade, bleak, blood, body, boy, brush, cat, child, Christmas, claw, cold, crush, cry, dance, dark, day, death, despair, desparation, devour, die, disappear, disguise, dream, dreary ( ), dress, drown, echo, empty, eyes, face, fade, fall, fear, feed, feel, fire, frozen, fur, game, garden, girl, gorgeous, grey, kill, kiss, icing, hand, happy, head, heart, heat, helpless, hold, hours, house, ice, inside, late, laugh, legs, lick, lies, life, light, lips, mind, mirror, moon, mouth, murder, name, never, night, old, play, press, push, reflection, remember, room, scared, scream, skin, sky, shadow, side by side, silence, sing, sleep, slow, smile, soft, speak, stairs, stare, story, stranger, sun, sweet, swim, tear, tears, time, tomorrow, touch, true, voice, watch, water, whisper, wish, world, writhe, years So pretty, pretty, pretty please write me a Cure poem? Ah'll let y' read it to me over the phone. Over an' over again. Please? written in blood before everything went black JCV [This message has been edited by Anvrill (07-19-2002 06:18 PM).] |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
BTW, I think that's 122 words to choose from. written in blood before everything went black |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Okay, babygrrl. One Cure poem comin' up! She said burn ... together. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Good evening. I read this earlier today before it had any replies at all, and held off my reply out of respect for who it was dedicated to. LOL! I wanted her to have the honor of the first reply. Looks like someone got in there first. This is a beautiful poem, and a beautiful way of doing such a wonderful thing. I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks for the well wishes and for enjoyin' th' poem, Jenn. She said burn ... together. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
K..you two... This is beautiful Mikey...and? you are lucky to have her!!! as she to you- of course.... and I take it back...love this mush-mush!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I think you're just happy 'cause of the three new poems in adult, D. She said burn ... together. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I really loved this, Mikey... ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thank you, Tier. And others are tryin' the Blood and rainbows challenge now. So cool. She said burn ... together. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
hmmm...could be... ?? but? I'll never tell- as I'm a lady n all...(yes "lady"~~shush it!) Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Whatever y' say, detanya. Hee hee. She said burn ... together. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I missed this the 1st time through..pity |
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