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FadeN2you
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since 2002-07-15
Posts 15


0 posted 2002-07-19 01:19 AM



Red fingernails mimic red blood,
that I wish I could spread tonight.
All across my pillows,
with the blade of this knife.

Blue eyes mimic blue tears,
that fall from these eyes now.
And I'm trying to get over this,
but I'm not really sure how.


A Black heart mimics a black soul,
that was suddenly touched by you.
And now you've left me here,
with nothing I can do.


Colors represent a whole other world inside of us, as you can notice.

--FadeN2you

© Copyright 2002 FadeN2you - All Rights Reserved
LadyPeach1
Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282

1 posted 2002-07-19 01:36 AM


You painted the picture of your poem well.  this was very nice!  i enjoyed.
LP1

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