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FadeN2you
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since 2002-07-15
Posts 15


0 posted 2002-07-19 01:13 AM



I guess I owe you an appology,
for believing in you when I shouldn't.
Because I gave you someone to control
and now you won't let go.

And I'm not sure of how much more of this I can take,
I'm not sure that this is going to work.
Because I'm already fragile,
and you're just making it worse.


If I was not so weak,
and if I was not so cold,
maybe I wouldn't be so scared,
of who you are and who I was.


This house echos empty now,
making me think that maybe it's you.
And you're here to take your revenge,
to send me to my tomb.


And I wouldn't put you past it,
you want me out of your life.
That's why you keep coming into it,
and leaving me torn apart, sliced.


Ehhh not so sure what this was, some random thoughts put together, but here ya go.


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LadyPeach1
Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282

1 posted 2002-07-19 01:41 AM


Well, I loved your random thoughts, and you put them together spendidly!  NICE JOB!
LP1

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