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Neala
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0 posted 2002-07-18 10:42 PM



When I wake up
I ponder many things
The smell of your cholthes
What I want to do today
What I should do today

And once they day is half past
I realize I acomplished nothing short
Or what I shouldn't have
There isn't anything in my body
That does what I want
And nothing that I need

Just enough to keep me alive
And just enough to statify all the needs
To please and unforgiving world

-Neala

[This message has been edited by Neala (07-18-2002 10:46 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-07-19 01:21 AM


Nice poetry. I often find myself at lost too. Thank you for sharing.

Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.)

Neala
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2 posted 2002-07-20 11:17 AM


Thanks glad you liked it.
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