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wranx
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Moved from a shack to a barn

0 posted 2002-07-18 10:03 PM


Flitter Flutter


Trap tripped
Net snagged
Flitter flutter
There suspend
Thick twists
Avian panic
Evil attends
Menace moves
Cradle capture
Web bound
Web wound
Hump Pump
Fang lance
Fang wound
Venom dance
Bridal bundle
Song stilled
I awoke early this morning with a head full of 2 word phrases. I jotted them down, not wanting to forget them. When I read them later, they appeared to relate to a creepy occurence last summer. Rearranged, they tell this story. ("Fang lance" is the only phrase added later). I think, I like the sub-conscience doing all of the "hard work".

~wranx


I have great faith in Humanity...It's just most of the Humans, I'm not too keen on.     E.F.Rose

[This message has been edited by wranx (07-19-2002 01:19 AM).]

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Tiersdin
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1 posted 2002-07-18 10:49 PM


Very interesting writing here, Wranx...

I like it!

~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

bsquirrel
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2 posted 2002-07-18 10:53 PM


Cool spiderbird poem, wranx! Y' knew ah'd like it.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

brian sites
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since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475
usa
3 posted 2002-07-19 12:10 PM


where do you live,
on the amazon river?
geez
from epics to op-eds
to this little gem
doin it all here
shackman
BS.
ps. you know the Amazons were women?
just checkin
(roaring glee)

I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles

wranx
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since 2002-06-07
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Moved from a shack to a barn
4 posted 2002-07-19 01:24 AM


Tier, I loves it when ya read me like ya do.

squirrel dude, Ah figgered ya wood.

Brian? Do I STILL have some dried crust of egg upon me chagrined, yet shag grinned puss?

WHAT!?

~wranx


I have great faith in Humanity...It's just most of the Humans, I'm not too keen on.     E.F.Rose

[This message has been edited by wranx (07-19-2002 01:27 AM).]

devina
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since 1999-10-28
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Cali
5 posted 2002-07-21 12:00 PM


So the truth comes out eh man???

*interrogation lamp*
So you KNEW the sub-conscience was creating while you dreamed????

grins...

enjoyed this wranx....

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



Purity
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since 2001-11-20
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Once Upon, USA
6 posted 2002-07-21 01:26 PM


Hear, here
Heard, herd

This "Flitter Flutter" fluttered me flitter. I.E. - much the liked!!

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