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Dark Poetry #3

Whore

gbem1
Junior Member

since 2002-07-13

Posts 13

0 posted 2002-07-18 09:14 PM

Whore
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Counting the days that are away from you
So many event thought to be untrue
Looking through a fragment of broken glass
Steping into a portal of deep sadness

I see you - spot you off in the distance
Shivering with a spind-chilling fear
And I, the abductor, conductor of moral truth
Take pride in knowing you are so near

And your screams are hollow echoes
As I finally approach
Nothing but a whisper in the darkness
A heartbeat in a lifetime

And my skin forces itself upon your own
And then I release and I am alone
Within this sick fantasy
I finally awaken
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Greg

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

1 posted 2002-07-19 01:23 AM

Awesome usage of words. It paints a picture. HOT, HOT, POEM.

Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.)

Secret Whisper
Member

since 2001-01-25

Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass

2 posted 2002-07-24 04:24 PM

Wow, the last stanza is truly... intense. Well written (albeit twisted) piece. Oh the wicked fantasies of our minds.

"I am not alive enough to kill myself." - Mary Ipal

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