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Jonathan The Mind
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since 2002-07-13
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Minnesota

0 posted 2002-07-18 07:15 PM


UNKNOWN
By: Jonathan L.

Lying upon the curved couch
Staring deep into dark pools of black
Slowly the blackness grows
Beads of wetness fall down my face
Shaking before the visions
Morbid memories floating in an empty mind
Body parts hanging from hangers of clothes
Heads beaten upon broken glass
Lakes of blood cover the linoleum
The taste of brain remains
Eyes shift to the holder of blackness
Air soars past my body
Bringing his mind into blackness
Eating his remains


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PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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since 2002-07-02
Posts 439
I am everywhere
1 posted 2002-07-18 07:29 PM


Gross... but very good.


_Sara

If we follow the invisible line of hatred, it will lead us straight to our hearts.

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