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shadowchild458
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since 2002-07-10
Posts 117
MN,USA

0 posted 2002-07-18 01:30 AM


I don't remember
how I got here
my mind is blank
as the wind is harsh
and I am waiting
for the answer
yet none comes
and I wonder
is it my fault
I can't see?
is it my fault
I don't feel?
is it my fault
I’m different?
is that it?
am I simply
in this world
just to be different
because
in the end
we all are
and my mind is blank
as the wind is harsh
and I am waiting
for the answer
yet none comes

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PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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since 2002-07-02
Posts 439
I am everywhere
1 posted 2002-07-18 11:42 AM


"am I simply
in this world
just to be different"

As I'm sure you know, everyone's different...
some more than others more, like you an I.
But your poems still have that effect... don't lose it!
(Is this the poem you thought was bad? Cuz it's not!)

Keep 'em comin!
-Sara

If we follow the invisible line of hatred, it will lead us straight to our hearts.

shadowchild458
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since 2002-07-10
Posts 117
MN,USA
2 posted 2002-07-18 02:09 PM


it was another poem that i thought (knew) was bad. this was a poem i wrote a long time ago like in december. i can't even remember writing it! well...thanks once again sara! lylas! bye

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PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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since 2002-07-02
Posts 439
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3 posted 2002-07-24 09:25 PM


I feel bad... more than just me should repling to your poetry...
YOU'RE SO TALENTED!!!!!!!

lol, i'm such an idiot.
I just realized what lylas means... at least i think I do....
lol, maybe?
lylas... i think.  heehee
ha ha ha... the COol-Aid guy!'

-sara


"Without you, without you, everything falls apart.
Without you, It's not as much fun to pick up the peices." -NinceInchNails

[This message has been edited by PoeticGoddessOfDepression (07-24-2002 09:26 PM).]

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