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where did the feeling go

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EveGnosis
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since 02-21-2002
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0 posted 07-17-2002 03:16 AM       View Profile for EveGnosis   Email EveGnosis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for EveGnosis


yes i know
life can bring you down
turn your beautiful smile
into a heart wrenching frown

yes i know
you're doing what you call your best
stepping slowly just in case
our situation chooses "your feet" to molest

yes i know
in times past your best you did show
but with nothing changed i have to ask
where did the feeling go?

yes i know
i'm a bit redundant, and so, lo!
after what we've been through, i ask once more
where did the feeling go?

yes i know
this time you must go slow
but after others walked away from you, you asked
where did the feeling go?

i'll always need a friend, one i can defend.

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sgreybe
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since 04-28-2000
Posts 211
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1 posted 07-17-2002 05:21 AM       View Profile for sgreybe   Email sgreybe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sgreybe

Dear EveGnosis

Well written!!!
Keep it up.

Sylvia
GoddessofHell
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2 posted 07-17-2002 06:25 AM       View Profile for GoddessofHell   Email GoddessofHell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GoddessofHell

Just so Beautiful....
Enjoyed very much.

Heather
green_itchy_stuff
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3 posted 04-15-2005 08:03 PM       View Profile for green_itchy_stuff   Email green_itchy_stuff   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for green_itchy_stuff

Hmmm,... the feeling, which one?  Everything feel a little different now, thats for sure.  Just leave it to God.  He's much smarter than I and he has an awesome chain of plans and events and way of doing things so his will for my life will always work out.  Just remember he is God and I am not.

-GIS

John 12:25 He that loveth his life shall lose it; and he that hateth his life in this world shall keep it unto life eternal.

A Romantic Heart
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4 posted 05-13-2005 02:46 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

I can relate to this one~you must have peeked in my heart~

~ARh

<i><b>"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away." </b>

Ace of Crimson Tears
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5 posted 04-10-2006 11:44 AM       View Profile for Ace of Crimson Tears   Email Ace of Crimson Tears   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Ace of Crimson Tears

I loved it. Don't lose your feeling I like reading your work.

~Matt~
 
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