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The Killer
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The Killer |
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gbem1 Junior Member
since 2002-07-13
Posts 13 |
The Killer ---------- A killer's thoughts A killer's mind A killer's dreams Are left behind When he kills He doesn't think His mind goes blank Eyes that don't blink When first blood Has been drawn From the body Mind is gone How does he see How does he act When his mind Is what his body lacked? Subconsciously done Another's work Not just a Simple perk A puppet master Mentally there In the mind In his lair |
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idrift2u Member
since 2002-07-09
Posts 60MD., USA |
A man going nuts and killing?...not bad, but what I really liked was the fast pace flow and rhythm your poem. Nice... Thanks |
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wickedclowngurl New Member
since 2002-07-16
Posts 3 |
This is something that I thought no one could write about unless they've done something like that and this was really well written.I liked this very much. wicked |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Interesting thoughts beget interesting poem. She said burn ... together. |
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alibaster Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 299In my own private hell...(PA). |
Good write...thank you. Wish that I could post the "seriel killer" series that I wrote for you to read...alas...it is too graphic and was deleted due to content. Until ...ali {alibaster} "There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul." (C)alibaster 1999-2001 |
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