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Dark Poetry #3

Night With The Devil

Dragon Mistress
Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 289
Washington, USA.

0 posted 2002-12-26 01:37 PM

Night With The Devil

I lie here motionless
Amongst chaotic covers
And angry tears

The moon
A cheshire cat smile
Mocks me

I'm afraid to move
To take a tiny breath
I musnt wake it

It's icey breath is on my neck
It's slimy hands on my breast
It's blood between my legs

Dripping with sin
Wet with evil
It's pleasure, is my nightmare

Why does it seem
That I, motionless without breath
Have slept with the devil himself?

Dragon Mistress

~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

[This message has been edited by Dragon Mistress (12-26-2002 01:39 PM).]

LADY_DEATH
Member

since 2002-11-29

Posts 105
Fl

1 posted 2002-12-27 04:05 PM

Call me sick, but i liked that poem.It had such intensityand graphic details.Very well written

Stinky Twinkie
Member

since 2002-11-26

Posts 204
Dinwiddie

2 posted 2002-12-28 02:33 PM

Well, you can call me sick too, but I also liked it.

-Stinky Twinkie-

D edgar Grey
Member

since 2002-08-21

Posts 174
Hell...(aka Wisconsin)

3 posted 2002-12-28 03:13 PM

I also enjoyed that piece...very descriptive and vivid. Guess that makes us all pervs! Very nice. (Work, I mean.)

If homosexuality is a disease, let's all call in queer to work: "Hello. Can't work today, still queer." (If only...>; P)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2002-12-30 11:14 PM

Interesting...James

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