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wranx
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since 2002-06-07
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Moved from a shack to a barn

0 posted 2002-07-13 09:17 PM



“Our Goddesses”

A Goddess has arrived
in this Dark place

A Goddess
now two, to muse
amuse and bemuse us
with their own
impressions of depression

Twins? no, but
Sisters, surely
Starkly darkling
Right dark, write dark

Armed, they are
with Charm swords
charms words, word charms
knell words, hell words

Ramble gambol
from Dark into Open
then back into black
to dwell here among us


~wranx


"Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do...provided it's done in private and you wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein.

© Copyright 2002 E.F.Rose - All Rights Reserved
GoddessofHell
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since 2002-07-09
Posts 76

1 posted 2002-07-13 09:30 PM


WOW....How lucky WE goddesses are.....I LOVE THIS!!!!!! And of course I shall add this to the library. hehe * blushing *


Sooo Cool!

Heather

idrift2u
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since 2002-07-09
Posts 60
MD., USA
2 posted 2002-07-13 11:11 PM


Time to leave yet?


hug!

bsquirrel
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Posts 7855

3 posted 2002-07-14 12:01 PM


You noticed that too, huh?

She said burn ... together.
-TON

brian sites
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since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475
usa
4 posted 2002-07-14 03:32 AM


I see JJ creeping back in after a long rest
Glad to see it
whereas I like stories
I like chewing on these burnt little cookies
better
BS.

I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles

Purity
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since 2001-11-20
Posts 526
Once Upon, USA
5 posted 2002-07-14 01:46 PM


My, my, wranx...lol I did enjoy finding this one to be quite uniquely "punny"...the word-swapping was perfect.

[This message has been edited by Purity (07-14-2002 05:54 PM).]

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