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shadowchild458 Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 117MN,USA |
fairy tales and litte thrills pleasent shower lasts an hour fear to come you're the one won't make it here my little dear only lies nobody dies pathetic stories getting boring? dream a lot we've never fought in your dreams not what it seems? colors swirl trapped little girl do not know does not show can't be right peaceful light gotta be what you don't see come awake your breath i take not for long struggle gone in this world no hope little girl you still may dream though crushed they'll seem the world is cruel what may apear cool is just a lie go ahead, die |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Ooo, like a bitter fairy tale gone real. Sweet stuff, Abby! She said burn ... together. |
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shadowchild458 Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 117MN,USA |
hey thanks, glad someone commented! |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Abby, I'm sooooooooooooooooooo Sorry. I didn't see this at all, i would have commented, cuz we're buds, and because ur a kick-ass poet, but I didn't even see it. But since i'm going through all of your poems, and posting over and over again, I saw this. I loved it. keep 'em comin! (sorry) _SARA [This message has been edited by PoeticGoddessOfDepression (07-24-2002 09:54 PM).] |
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