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blakloks
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since 2002-06-01
Posts 60


0 posted 2002-07-13 07:18 AM


the 'what are you able to build with your blocks' stanza is from a Child's garden of verses.

What are you able to build with your blocks?
Castles and palaces, temples and docks
Rain can keep raining and others go roam,
But I can be happy and building at home.

The moment I saw it I went
numb. My body tried to pretend
that it couldn't feel the dent
that nothing had happened

What are you able to build with your blocks?
Castles and palaces, temples and docks
Rain can keep raining and others go roam,
But I can be happy and building at home.

but inside I cry
the lava threatens to spill out
of me. Why
I see the faces around pout

What are you able to build with your blocks?
Castles and palaces, temples and docks
Rain can keep raining and others go roam,
But I can be happy and building at home.

a laser cuts through me
its like all my plans are gone
and I will exist to be
not even one

What are you able to build with your blocks?
Castles and palaces, temples and docks
Rain can keep raining and others go roam,
But I can be happy and building at home.

there's this aching pain
that wont go away
there's this eternal rain
coming my way…

© Copyright 2002 blakloks - All Rights Reserved
GoddessofHell
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since 2002-07-09
Posts 76

1 posted 2002-07-13 05:09 PM


Nice...I enjoyed reading.

Heather

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2 posted 2002-07-13 08:51 PM


I love how you played the feeling of being trapped off the feeling of a place to belong.

Hope Dark will be a good home for y'.

Buildingly,

Mike

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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