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shadowchild458 Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 117MN,USA |
got on a bus going nowhere I thought I was someone who would live a long time heard the busdriver snoaring we drove on got on a bus going nowhere I thought I was someone who would give a damn though i didn't 5 am stopped for snacks coffee and twinkies and many shades of orange couldn't watch the sunrise heard the busdriver snoaring we drove on got on a bus going nowhere I thought I was someone who needed to get away i was wrong to hell with me the rust is waiting shame on me for thinking I would sleep heard the busdriver snoaring we drove on www.freedonation.com [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (07-13-2002 08:31 PM).] |
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shadowchild458 Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 117MN,USA |
holy crap! sorry people! i didn't mean to make it pink! gosh that is so ugly and anoying!!! sorry! |
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GoddessofHell Member
since 2002-07-09
Posts 76 |
Hey...nice poem and pink is my favorite colour!!!! Heather |
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akira Member
since 2002-07-13
Posts 79Idaho |
I love your poem...its good...the structure is nice as well...although, i dont care for the color pink....hehee |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
There y' go! Color fixed! (nice poem -- reminds me of parts of my stay in Calgary  )She said burn ... together. |
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