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PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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0 posted 07-12-2002 10:39 PM       View Profile for PoeticGoddessOfDepression   Email PoeticGoddessOfDepression   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for PoeticGoddessOfDepression

My nails, black.
My clothes, black.
My personality, black.
My hair, blonde.
You say there's something wrong with me.

Someone must have taken my identity.
Look at you.

Your shirt, pastel pink.
You shoes, high.
Your hobies, shopping.
Your sex, male.
I'd say there's something wrong with you...

"Life is a waterfall, we're 1 in the river and we're 1 again after the fall."
-System of A down

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idrift2u
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1 posted 07-12-2002 10:42 PM       View Profile for idrift2u   Email idrift2u   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for idrift2u

Wow, your really posting a boat load tonight...

You know, I used to wear all black
but then I started balding


Nice post,

Thanks
PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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2 posted 07-12-2002 10:47 PM       View Profile for PoeticGoddessOfDepression   Email PoeticGoddessOfDepression   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoeticGoddessOfDepression

only 3ish...
Thanks for replying 'a boatload tonight'.
Badling... that would upset me... >
Thanks!!

"Life is a waterfall, we're 1 in the river and we're 1 again after the fall."
-System of A down

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3 posted 07-12-2002 11:43 PM       View Profile for shadowchild458   Email shadowchild458   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for shadowchild458

do you really wear that much black? lol i loved this poem. reminds me of someone i know. hey, exchanging of insults always makes a interesting poem. i love writing poetry like that!

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4 posted 07-13-2002 08:17 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

That rocked!

(a black wearer)

She said burn ... together.
-TON

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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5 posted 07-18-2002 02:04 PM       View Profile for PoeticGoddessOfDepression   Email PoeticGoddessOfDepression   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoeticGoddessOfDepression

ShadowChild, I do wear a lot of black, not that I'm Goth, or there's anything wrong with being Goth, but I'm not exactly.
Bqurriel, You know YOU rock!!

Thanks everyone.
-Sara

If we follow the invisible line of hatred, it will lead us straight to our hearts.

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6 posted 01-01-2004 04:12 PM       View Profile for devinechild22   Email devinechild22   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devinechild22

It was sort of funny in a way to me. Maybe I'm just retarded.
           *Allison*

"Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland."

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