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PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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I am everywhere


0 posted 07-12-2002 10:21 PM       View Profile for PoeticGoddessOfDepression   Email PoeticGoddessOfDepression   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for PoeticGoddessOfDepression


My tears are pure.
Iíve never cried out of happiness
And guilt all at the same time.
You said I had a beautiful innocence that you could listen to for hours.
You bring down my powers,
You make me weak.

We both agreed,
That nothing would ever happen between us,
Nothing more than friendship.
You said that you care about what I feel, and why I feel it.
I personally donít think you give a ****,
But Iíd like to believe.

Iím sorry for feeling what I do.
I wish I could be closer to you.
But youíd push me away.
I push me away.
Youíre more of a shrink to me,
You pretend you care,
But when Iím not there,
You donít think of me.
You donít wish for me.
You donít hope for me.

I donít need what I donít have from you,
And Iím happy with what we do have.
Letís not change this,
Iíll pretend that I am gladÖ
And that I never wrote this.




"Life is a waterfall, we're 1 in the river and we're 1 again after the fall."
-System of A down

[This message has been edited by PoeticGoddessOfDepression (07-12-2002 10:31 PM).]

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idrift2u
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1 posted 07-12-2002 10:28 PM       View Profile for idrift2u   Email idrift2u   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for idrift2u

straight forward, to the point,
and very tragic...
Thanks...
shadowchild458
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since 07-10-2002
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2 posted 07-12-2002 11:50 PM       View Profile for shadowchild458   Email shadowchild458   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for shadowchild458

oh gosh i think it's contagious! ahhhh! i'm running out of things to say too! i've been replying to so many poems of other peoples and yours that it just is getting old "great poem! interesting topic! i loved it! keep writing!" wow how many times have i typed that! lol well anyways another great poem. God bless! bye

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brian sites
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3 posted 07-13-2002 12:16 AM       View Profile for brian sites   Email brian sites   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian sites

sara, you have so many good lines in this.
this is my favorite so far.
don't take less than you wanted.
sad, but real good
BS.

I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles

GoddessofHell
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4 posted 07-13-2002 12:31 AM       View Profile for GoddessofHell   Email GoddessofHell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GoddessofHell

Love this...and I can relate.
Heather
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5 posted 07-13-2002 08:28 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Enjoyed, PDoD. Careful with **** maskin' profanity, though. It's not allowed here.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

devinechild22
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6 posted 01-01-2004 04:09 PM       View Profile for devinechild22   Email devinechild22   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devinechild22

Beautifull tragic.
             *Allison*

"Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland."

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