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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
My tears are pure. I’ve never cried out of happiness And guilt all at the same time. You said I had a beautiful innocence that you could listen to for hours. You bring down my powers, You make me weak. We both agreed, That nothing would ever happen between us, Nothing more than friendship. You said that you care about what I feel, and why I feel it. I personally don’t think you give a ****, But I’d like to believe. I’m sorry for feeling what I do. I wish I could be closer to you. But you’d push me away. I push me away. You’re more of a shrink to me, You pretend you care, But when I’m not there, You don’t think of me. You don’t wish for me. You don’t hope for me. I don’t need what I don’t have from you, And I’m happy with what we do have. Let’s not change this, I’ll pretend that I am glad… And that I never wrote this. "Life is a waterfall, we're 1 in the river and we're 1 again after the fall." -System of A down [This message has been edited by PoeticGoddessOfDepression (07-12-2002 10:31 PM).] |
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idrift2u Member
since 2002-07-09
Posts 60MD., USA |
straight forward, to the point, and very tragic... Thanks... |
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shadowchild458 Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 117MN,USA |
oh gosh i think it's contagious! ahhhh! i'm running out of things to say too! i've been replying to so many poems of other peoples and yours that it just is getting old "great poem! interesting topic! i loved it! keep writing!" wow how many times have i typed that! lol well anyways another great poem. God bless! bye |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
sara, you have so many good lines in this. this is my favorite so far. don't take less than you wanted. sad, but real good BS. I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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GoddessofHell Member
since 2002-07-09
Posts 76 |
Love this...and I can relate. Heather |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Enjoyed, PDoD. Careful with **** maskin' profanity, though. It's not allowed here.  She said burn ... together. |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
Beautifull tragic. *Allison* "Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland." |
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