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shadowchild458 Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 117MN,USA |
Mrs. Willow, Mrs. Willow, why do you cry? your son already dead your husband going to die Mrs. Willow, Mrs. Willow, I don't understand why a gap in your heart? and a gun in your hand? Mrs. Willow, Mrs. Willow, why do you weep your mother an alcoholic what other secrets does she keep? Mrs. Willow, Mrs. Willow, you life had not gone well when you know so many lies what do people have to tell? Mrs. Willow, Mrs. Willow, your memories of pain are not just an illusion life is not just a game Mrs. Willow, Mrs. Willow be free from denial though you sit in a chair life taken after trial Mrs. Willow, Mrs. Willow, what have you done? you killed your own father with his own gun? Mrs. Willow, Mrs. Willow, you're sick as can be why can't the world just look and then see? |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Every poem... I'm running out of things to say ... ugh! Well, it was amazing, and I understand what you meant about repeating the same name, but that's cool. Great job, is about all I got to say, I've said everything else on the rest of your poems... I need to think of more compliments... Keep writing and posting! -Sara "Life is a waterfall, we're 1 in the river and we're 1 again after the fall." |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
Oh yes... (I always remember stuff after it's too late) Very dark... if Mrs. Willow is real, she must be pretty sick... sick freak, burn in hell fire!!! (just jokeing) VEry good overall! -Sara again |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Ow ow ow ow ow. She said burn ... together. |
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