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Jessica
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0 posted 2002-07-12 02:19 AM


Bitter tears and broken hearts,
To one who does not deserve.
Pain and sorrow prevails,
As the victim grows dark.
The richness of soul deserts...
Being put through Hell leaves marks.

© Copyright 2002 Jessica Langford - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-07-12 11:54 AM


Two of my friends are going through something like this. Very good write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

brian sites
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2 posted 2002-07-12 12:56 PM


scarred but hopefully
wiser
and deeper for the experience
nice poem
BS.

I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles

GoddessofHell
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3 posted 2002-07-12 01:58 PM


Being put through Hell leaves marks.

I like this....very nice.

Heather

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4 posted 2002-07-13 05:57 AM


Short but Sweet!  I love it Jess!  
LP1

bsquirrel
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5 posted 2002-07-13 08:40 PM


Yes, it does. I love how th' title works with this poem, too. Great job...

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Anvrill
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6 posted 2002-07-13 10:12 PM


Gotta agree with Mike. And be envious of how you can make a short poem work... My ideas ramble on endlessly. Someone teach me how to keep it short!!

"Silly bunny, there are no monsters in here." - Chrys, from Gloom Cookie

Jessica
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7 posted 2002-07-16 08:16 PM


Thanks for all of your replies.
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