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0 posted 2002-07-12 01:22 AM


You thought I was done,
With my dark side for a while,
No wonder it is quiet here,
Chaos and I took a little break,
But this time blood will run,
Afraid to be near death,
Souls will clench each other,
For no one is left without suffering,
I painted a picture of hell,
Oh, how it was all so well
Till I stopped,
I am back with a lesson-
Are you willing to hear me speak?
Let go of your courage-
And sanity will leak,
This ride through many hells,
Will burn your eyes,
As each word will be cursed,
With a poet’s rite…

Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.)

© Copyright 2002 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-07-12 11:53 AM


Awesome!!! I enjoyed this.

Cold hands means a warm heart

GoddessofHell
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2 posted 2002-07-12 02:01 PM


I am back with a lesson-
Are you willing to hear me speak?
Let go of your courage-
And sanity will leak,
This ride through many hells,
Will burn your eyes,
As each word will be cursed,
With a poet’s rite…


Cool lines!

Heather

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3 posted 2002-07-13 07:55 PM


Who are you again? Just kidding! Enjoyed th' poem, X.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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