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PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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0 posted 07-11-2002 02:00 PM       View Profile for PoeticGoddessOfDepression   Email PoeticGoddessOfDepression   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for PoeticGoddessOfDepression


Emotions are racing back and forth.
Yet, I'm forced to live another day.
Thoughts of you that I pray,
Will leave my hopeless mind today.

An adolescent, lost in shadows,
of her own imagination.
An empty hollow's, been forgotten,
no one cares, it happens everyday.


But what If that hollow was you?

You laugh at me, because i'm different.
I laugh at you, because you're all the same.

© Copyright 2002 Sara Nicole - All Rights Reserved
shadowchild458
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1 posted 07-11-2002 05:06 PM       View Profile for shadowchild458   Email shadowchild458   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for shadowchild458

hey! i liked it! very good! hey, comment on my poetry???

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brian sites
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2 posted 07-11-2002 10:45 PM       View Profile for brian sites   Email brian sites   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian sites

everyone has been hollow
and should never forget that.
just reminded me of a chinese proverb
what is the useful part of a teacup?
the empty part
and that question can be applied to a surprising number of things in life.
sorry for the preach
liked your poem
BS.

I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles

idrift2u
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3 posted 07-11-2002 10:49 PM       View Profile for idrift2u   Email idrift2u   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for idrift2u

or the total mass of the cup which creates the whole
blakloks
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4 posted 07-13-2002 06:32 AM       View Profile for blakloks   Email blakloks   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for blakloks

yeah, sometimes i feel that no one cares about anybody except themselves. i really liked the last line.
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5 posted 07-13-2002 08:45 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Whoa.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

devinechild22
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6 posted 01-01-2004 04:03 PM       View Profile for devinechild22   Email devinechild22   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devinechild22

People do care about themselves first of all and it's sick. I'm one to talk though.
            *Allison*

"Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland."

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7 posted 04-10-2006 10:57 AM       View Profile for Ace of Crimson Tears   Email Ace of Crimson Tears   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Ace of Crimson Tears

That was nice, I can picture what you're talking about. Keep writing I like your work alot.

~Matt~
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