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PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

0 posted 2002-07-11 02:00 PM

Emotions are racing back and forth.
Yet, I'm forced to live another day.
Thoughts of you that I pray,
Will leave my hopeless mind today.

An adolescent, lost in shadows,
of her own imagination.
An empty hollow's, been forgotten,
no one cares, it happens everyday.

But what If that hollow was you?

You laugh at me, because i'm different.
I laugh at you, because you're all the same.

shadowchild458
Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 117
MN,USA

1 posted 2002-07-11 05:06 PM

hey! i liked it! very good! hey, comment on my poetry???

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brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

2 posted 2002-07-11 10:45 PM

everyone has been hollow
and should never forget that.
just reminded me of a chinese proverb
what is the useful part of a teacup?
the empty part
and that question can be applied to a surprising number of things in life.
sorry for the preach
liked your poem
BS.

I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles

idrift2u
Member

since 2002-07-09

Posts 60
MD., USA

3 posted 2002-07-11 10:49 PM

or the total mass of the cup which creates the whole

blakloks
Member

since 2002-06-01

Posts 60

4 posted 2002-07-13 06:32 AM

yeah, sometimes i feel that no one cares about anybody except themselves. i really liked the last line.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

5 posted 2002-07-13 08:45 PM

Whoa.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

6 posted 2004-01-01 04:03 PM

People do care about themselves first of all and it's sick. I'm one to talk though.
*Allison*

"Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland."

Ace of Crimson Tears
Junior Member

since 2006-03-03

Posts 14
United States

7 posted 2006-04-10 10:57 AM

That was nice, I can picture what you're talking about. Keep writing I like your work alot.

~Matt~

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