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The Bath
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The Bath |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
The Bath A hard scrubbing lye excites skin and reddens a filthy liquid lust Scour soft pores and remove the scum of wasteful hardened rust Wait for the flesh to boil off weakened bones - fall into a steaming pile of stank gelatinous must and wash away with the next rain's acid bath of noxious putrid puss Now, we are clean 05.28.02 [This message has been edited by ma miller (07-10-2002 05:07 PM).] |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
I'm betting you feel a little more refreshed now. Liked it BS. I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Yup! nothin' like the Satiddy nite bath! Much enjoyed. ~wranx "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do...provided it's done in private and you wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Enjoyed this much!!! You have quite some imagery here!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
So that's how they make Jell-O molds! She said burn ... together. |
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