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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2002-07-09 01:51 AM



Rougher than ink
Barriers broken with shattered glass
Fields of grass no longer silent
Gunfire, a cry of freedom
Suicide bombers bursting with pride
Soldiers plastered against buses
Wads of blood scattered
Family’s cry to no avail
Propaganda infects all in danger
Morals slowly descend into the Dead Sea
Retaliation a must
God’s wings a shadow of betrayal
Cancer sounding appetizing
Locked in a train of thought
Eyes bloodshed, Blinded
Darkness, my only shelter
Two Nations, two different eyes

© Copyright 2002 Tomer Fried - All Rights Reserved
LMNOP
New Member
since 2002-07-08
Posts 7
NY, USA
1 posted 2002-07-09 02:14 AM


Very pleasurable.
Very felicitous.
Very seasonably timed.

Very, very, oh so necessary.

Thanks

wranx
Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
2 posted 2002-07-09 05:17 PM


It's good to see this addressed
More?

~wranx

"Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do...provided it's done in private and you wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein.

bsquirrel
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since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

3 posted 2002-07-13 06:55 PM


Hmm...

I'm with wranx. Glad y' grappled this!

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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