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bsquirrel
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0 posted 2002-07-07 09:04 PM



Just a little sting to heart.
Just a bit of poison valve.
Just a touch of rushing out.
Just a moment without sound.
Just a small bright sun of face.
Just a soothing etch of sea.
Just a time or two apart.
Just a wait to join to me.
Just a little sting to heart.
Just a string to weigh the stone.
Just a time or two (or more)
until we are no more alone.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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Tiersdin
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1 posted 2002-07-07 09:13 PM


I like this one, Mikey.  It's sad, but hopeful too...

and so sweet!

~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

Krishankins
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2 posted 2002-07-07 09:14 PM


Now THAT was good stuff!!

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

bsquirrel
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3 posted 2002-07-07 09:16 PM


Thank you, both. Now get the bee out of my room! (huh?)

She said burn ... together.
-TON

wranx
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4 posted 2002-07-07 09:45 PM


See there?, squirrel dude, ain't nothin but a thing.

~wranx

"Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do...provided it's done in private and you wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein.

bsquirrel
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5 posted 2002-07-08 02:36 PM


Bu...but it's called Little sting, not little thing!



Appreciate it, wranx.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Anvrill
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6 posted 2002-07-10 06:52 AM


And if you hadn't changed directions, I wouldn'ta been too happy with you.

Love y'.

"Es ist Folter, aber ich bin fast dort." Robert Smith's Torture in Deutsch.

bsquirrel
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7 posted 2002-07-10 11:51 AM


I love y' too!

Yr Ditzy Guy

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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