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bsquirrel
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0 posted 2002-07-07 07:51 PM



If I ever plead,
chop me off at the knees
so I cannot kneel
and beg for you to stay with me.

If I ever cry,
put spiders in my eyes
so their webs will kill my sight,
to hold a drink of tears and light.

If I ever pray,
throw me to the day
so I'm forced to see the crowds
of questions there repaid, renowned.

If I ever love,
strike me from above.
Lightning bolt away
so with you I will join and stay.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
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1 posted 2002-07-07 08:16 PM


Such achingly sweet words...

nice one, Mikey...

~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

Purity
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Once Upon, USA
2 posted 2002-07-08 01:19 AM


"to hold a drink of tears and light"...
"If ever I pray, throw me to the day"...

Most perfect, bud. I loved this one.

bsquirrel
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3 posted 2002-07-08 01:24 AM


Thanks, both.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

wranx
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4 posted 2002-07-08 11:51 AM


Bittersweet, squirrel dude

AND, still has that Arachnid thing goin' on.

~wranx

"Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do...provided it's done in private and you wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein.

bsquirrel
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5 posted 2002-07-08 02:31 PM


Well, I even have a spider pendant I always wear, so I can see how that might happen.

Thanks, wranx. (hey, that rhymes!)

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Anvrill
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6 posted 2002-07-10 06:50 AM


Now quit that this instant! Though I know you quit that moments after writing it.

Go watch No Such Thing. Aside from the ending, it was soooo good, and it's cute enough to snap any bad mood.

"Es ist Folter, aber ich bin fast dort." Robert Smith's Torture in Deutsch.

bsquirrel
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7 posted 2002-07-10 11:52 AM


Huh? You're making me look for something?

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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