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Dark Poetry #3

There is nothing left

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

0 posted 2002-07-06 09:39 PM

No sadness.
No heat.
No road.
No street.
No comfort.
No lack.
No color.
No black.
No sunlight.
No face.
No angel.
No place.
No holly.
No graves.
No trees.
No staves.
No sadness.
No plea.
No take backs.
No me.

These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun.
-RHCP

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

1 posted 2002-07-06 09:49 PM

awww... Mikey!

sad, but done well...

~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

Anvrill
Senior Member

since 2002-06-21

Posts 710
in the interzone now

2 posted 2002-07-06 09:53 PM

*sigh* I never seem to know what to do, do I? Can't help but think I aided in this mood. I'm sorry.

"Es ist Folter, aber ich bin fast dort." Robert Smith's Torture in Deutsch.

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

3 posted 2002-07-06 11:30 PM

No love
No good
No kiddin'

Hang in there, squirrel dude

~wranx

"Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do...provided it's done in private and you wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein.

LadyPeach1
Member

since 2001-06-04

Posts 282

4 posted 2002-07-07 02:22 AM

This was GREAT. Very sad... but this was AWESOME! GREAT WRITE.
LP1

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

5 posted 2002-07-07 02:26 AM

Tier,
Glad to see y' here. Ah've missed y'.

Lori,
Not yr fault. Both our faults. I love you. "Even" when lahk this.

Wranx,
Thanks.

Lp1,
danke.

These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun.
-RHCP

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (07-07-2002 02:28 AM).]

blakloks
Member

since 2002-06-01

Posts 60

6 posted 2002-07-07 11:23 AM

really sad...but great work

arthur
Senior Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

7 posted 2002-07-07 03:26 PM

liked it
because without you nothing exists
you are the sole creator of your own universe
arthur

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