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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-07-04 04:28 AM


Every poem is a page
of my own dark journal's rage.
Even entries written bright
foreshadow fall of sun's demise.

A ridicule of self--
it's treason--
a little bit of rhyme--
no reason

Every page is drop of blood.
Tear-stains leaving proof--I loved.

[This message has been edited by serenity (07-04-2002 04:36 AM).]

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arthur
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1 posted 2002-07-04 11:18 AM


to have loved and lost etc!
arthur

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2 posted 2002-07-04 11:28 AM


I like this very much Ms. Serene One.
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Cali
3 posted 2002-07-04 12:40 PM


Ah..you hit the mark repeatedly...

this! is what we mean by LOVED (E-D) of course...

I've lost quite a bit of blood myself...*sigh*

hugs sis
Tanya

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



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4 posted 2002-07-04 03:00 PM


oooh this one is better than mine in a dark way

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

Match
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5 posted 2002-07-04 03:01 PM


I really liked it

Do I dare to look at whats really there,
Will I be burned?
I cant see past all the pain and torture that goes on in the places we call,
home.
~Azi

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6 posted 2002-07-05 01:59 AM


yes yes yes..
I'm in search of the truly Dark tonight, Lady. I've found another one.

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

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7 posted 2002-07-06 05:54 PM


Great response, Sen. Heartachily.

Mike

These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun.
-RHCP

Tiersdin
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8 posted 2002-07-06 08:48 PM


To the one called "sincere"
I say, "here-here"
for these very lines
once were mine...

~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

Krishankins
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9 posted 2002-07-06 09:34 PM


"Tear stains leaving proof I loved"
this is truly poetic!!



Krishankins

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MidnightSon
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10 posted 2002-07-07 03:59 AM


an intense, dark flame.
what a poem.
-library-

it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown

Anvrill
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11 posted 2002-07-14 08:41 AM


I can't believe I haven't replied to this yet!!

Very amazing. I think everyone who lives and breathes poetry, whether they believe themselves to be a poet or not, must have a journal like that. Though admittedly, I wish I could burn some of my earlier entries, it's still a testament to who I am.

Great read.

"Silly bunny, there are no monsters in here." - Chrys, from Gloom Cookie

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12 posted 2002-07-14 03:44 PM


Very dark, S, I like.
Sandra

serenity blaze
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13 posted 2002-07-14 03:55 PM


hey...I'd forgotten about this one! Thanks for the great responses...

*shaking my head* again...giggle....that ever happen to ya'll? This was like--"nice poem" and me: "POEM? WHAT POEM...oh..heh heh, yeah, right, THAT POEM. er, thank you!"

I think I need a nice long vacation...I understand "white coats" are in season this summer...sigh.

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