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PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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0 posted 07-03-2002 10:22 PM       View Profile for PoeticGoddessOfDepression   Email PoeticGoddessOfDepression   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for PoeticGoddessOfDepression


You held me through guilt.
You took me for granted.
Your mouth will be of pavement.
When I smash it in the ground.
Iím sick of your voice.
Iím sick of your talk.
Iím sick of you.
And your sick of me.
For once I guess things worked out.
But nothing ends happily.
You sucked away my pain.
Youíre a maggot of God.
This God is un-existing.
This God, you think is you.


The day I cut off your wings
And watch you fly.
The day I rip out your heart
And watch you live; not die
Will be the day
That I believe that youíre
ÖthisÖ
ďGodĒ
But until that day
You are worthless, and mean nothing to me.
Until you prove to me
Youíre special
Youíre unordinary,
Iím going to try to forget about you.


-Sara
(lovely Love poem, ain't it?)


You laugh at me, because i'm different.
I laugh at you, because you're all the same.

[This message has been edited by PoeticGoddessOfDepression (07-04-2002 07:17 PM).]

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wranx
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1 posted 07-03-2002 10:51 PM       View Profile for wranx   Email wranx   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wranx

Since you request that no one praise your work, I would suggest that you lose this line.  

"Youíre worth holding onto,"

Your poetry is really very good...so there!

~wranx

"Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do...provided it's done in private and you wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein.

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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2 posted 07-04-2002 02:56 PM       View Profile for PoeticGoddessOfDepression   Email PoeticGoddessOfDepression   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoeticGoddessOfDepression

Thank you for your honesty.

-Sara

You laugh at me, because i'm different.
I laugh at you, because you're all the same.

Match
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since 07-01-2002
Posts 287
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3 posted 07-04-2002 08:26 PM       View Profile for Match   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Match

Its really good , maybe i need to show this one to my ex .

Do I dare to look at whats really there,
Will I be burned?
I cant see past all the pain and torture that goes on in the places we call,
home.
~Azi

devinechild22
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4 posted 01-01-2004 04:01 PM       View Profile for devinechild22   Email devinechild22   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devinechild22

Amazing. I think that about sums it up.
      *Allison*

"Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland."

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