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And Then You Hurt Me

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PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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And.Then.You.Hurt.Me
Iíve heard that love hurts.
But I didnít think it could feel like this.

Iíve heard it burns.
But I never knew that it could be true.

But you know me,
I had to find out for myself,
And now all is empty,
And now all is gone.
Iíve lost more than a friend,
You were everything to me.
But I had to fall in love
And then you hurt me.

Iíve heard that boys cheat.
But I didnít think that was like you,

Iíve heard they lie.
But youíd never done me wrong.

But you know me,
I had to take a chance.
Andnow my ocean is shallow
And filled with sharp steep rocks.
Iíve lost you more than once,
But now itís not pretend.
But I had to fall in love
And then you hurt me againÖ

But then I had to find out for myself
And then I learned
That it all is true
That I canít trust you,
I never would have guessed
That youíd make me a foolÖ

You laugh at me, because i'm different.
I laugh at you, because you're all the same.

© Copyright 2002 Sara Nicole - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 07-03-2002 11:06 PM       View Profile for wranx   Email wranx   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wranx

Sara, this theme is universal. Most of us write about a betrayal (or several)and no one likes the way it feels. You have done an admirable job expressing yourslf in this piece. Keep up the good work.

~wranx

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PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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2 posted 07-04-2002 07:19 PM       View Profile for PoeticGoddessOfDepression   Email PoeticGoddessOfDepression   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoeticGoddessOfDepression

Thank you so much. Your compliment is greatly appreciated.

-Sara  

You laugh at me, because i'm different.
I laugh at you, because you're all the same.

devinechild22
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3 posted 01-01-2004 03:58 PM       View Profile for devinechild22   Email devinechild22   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devinechild22

So sad Sara...So sad but beautiful. You really know how to put your feelings into words.
         *Allison*

"Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland."

 
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