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Succumb & Burn |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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When the stars depress the moon ~you know it’s time to change~ When the dawn breaks in heartache ~you need to exit the stage~ You realize so blatantly All is lost to misery You seethe in a helpless shell ~Rationalize~ Do not dwell… Wax drip of tears I wipe gently ~lose your fears~ Believe in me… I’ll shadow intimidations call and give you wings to break your fall… You’ve reached your point of no return Tis the end of innocence ~Succumb and burn~ Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Hope yr rat makes a full recovery!  And ah know th' poem isn't about a rat, but I think the feelings of sorta powerlessness and acquiescence (did I spell that right?) are from what yr goin' through. *big hugs* Mikey These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Uhm...yeah, what Mike said!! And it's really good too!!  Kris A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Two of my favorites... You're probably right...been a dreary day on my end...*sigh* for now? I think I shall drown in my own ponders and come back to the world on the morrow... hugs n mushy stuff ~me Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
finding the truly dark poetry. I loved this, Lady. I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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BrandeeM Junior Member
since 2002-05-01
Posts 45 |
needin some wings myself right about now hun...wish you were here.... |
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GoddessofHell Member
since 2002-07-09
Posts 76 |
Beautiful as always.... Heather |
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LadyPeach1 Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282 |
I’ll shadow intimidations call and give you wings to break your fall… I love those lines!!! this poem is beautiful. LP1 |
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