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Dark Poetry #3

My Own Dark Journal

Moon Dust

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since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

0 posted 2002-07-03 05:07 PM

So I changed the title slighty

Sittin in the corner of my room,
My own dark space painted black,
Seems to celebrate my mood,
As I peer into my own dark journal,

Every word I used ehcoed amonst the pages,
Every sentence I had to share here,
Every story of my life sat on the dark pages,
Every word set like in stone in my own dark journal,

Sitting in the coner of my room,
Time seems to stop in the dark,
seems to celebrate my mood,
As I write into my own dark journal.

I'm wise enough now not to let cool get to me.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

1 posted 2002-07-03 06:43 PM

Excellent! Glad to see the challenge catching on like wildfire! (well, remember, this is Dark

)

And don't worry.... NOBODY'S followed the exact letter of the challenge... including me!

Mike

These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun.
-RHCP

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

2 posted 2002-07-03 07:04 PM

I really liked this.
Your quite good at this dark stuff!
Keep it up!

-Sara

You laugh at me, because i'm different.
I laugh at you, because you're all the same.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2002-07-03 07:26 PM

I pictured candlelight and a quill, here...
with long shadows cast on the wall.

Enjoyed the read!

devina
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

4 posted 2002-07-03 07:31 PM

*ahem* I think I were the only one to use your words mike...so there!!! *grins*

Enjoyed the dark of you here...

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

5 posted 2002-07-04 02:01 PM

good I'm havin a dark turn at the mo

thanks u all 4 reading

I'm wise enough now not to let cool get to me.

wranx
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since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

6 posted 2002-07-04 10:35 PM

Nicely written answer to mikes' challange.

~wranx

"Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do...provided it's done in private and you wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein.

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