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My Dying World

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PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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0 posted 07-02-2002 09:56 PM       View Profile for PoeticGoddessOfDepression   Email PoeticGoddessOfDepression   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for PoeticGoddessOfDepression



In my world
Everyone is dying,
In my world…
Disease is sweet.

In my world
Everyone is useless,
In my world…
Hopelessness is beautiful.

In my world
Everything is gone,
In my world…
Vacant is a God.
In the world I’ve created…
Everyone is dead.
But in this world,
Life, is no better than death.

Best wishes,
Sara

© Copyright 2002 Sara Nicole - All Rights Reserved
Match
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1 posted 07-02-2002 10:11 PM       View Profile for Match   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Match

wow, that made me cry ,  i liked it

Do I dare to look at whats really there,
Will I be burned?
I cant see past all the pain and torture that goes on in the places we call,
home.
~Azi

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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2 posted 07-02-2002 10:14 PM       View Profile for PoeticGoddessOfDepression   Email PoeticGoddessOfDepression   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoeticGoddessOfDepression

I'm sorry!  I didn't mean to make you cry.
Thank you for replying to my poem.  That means alot.
wranx
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3 posted 07-02-2002 10:35 PM       View Profile for wranx   Email wranx   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wranx

Sorry, goddess, there's nothing about this that I didn't like...therefor, no comment

~wranx

"Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do...provided it's done in private and you wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein.

devinechild22
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4 posted 01-01-2004 03:53 PM       View Profile for devinechild22   Email devinechild22   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devinechild22

Sara you sure do have a way with words. You're so talented and I admire you greatly.
         *Allison*

"Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland."

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