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A day I had |
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deep_thought Junior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 24 |
There was a day I once had I had to do a lot Just like the morals I was taught I ended up on the last rung Ladder of morality snakes, I slid Even as I climbed, I did There was a day I once had I had a lot to say Truth to be told lies to kill But all along the way Neither the guts, nor the will Even as I lied, I did There was a day I once had Happy, I was and bright The world I saw ate that away Along with it, my might Never happy another day Even as I sighed, I did There was a life I once lived Where even as I lived, I died |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
sad this very sad arthur |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
This has a even, lyrical, song-like quality ~wranx "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do...provided it's done in private and you wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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deep_thought Junior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 24 |
Thankx, guys. This is one of my older pieces.....teen angst, I guess. And yeah, I wrote this piece listening to Metallica, so it has a song like quality....  |
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