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My Mind.... The Enemy
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My Mind.... The Enemy |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands 
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What do I feel inside of me Who's screaming do I hear... Why can't I run away from it What is this awful fear With every step it followes me an echo deep inside It doesn't matter where I go there is no place to hide My mind is leading me to places where I don't want to go It let me search for things that I don't want to know One day I will be strong enough to face the awful truth The darkness of my inner soul the shadows of my youth Until that day arrives I can only see my intruding mind ..... as the enemy..... |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
I am fighting with mine as I write. I'm glad I'm not the only one. Nice write! Krishankins A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Your struggle has elicited a good piece. ~wranx "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do....just remember to wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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deep_thought Junior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 24 |
Very nice. Keep up the good work. "I know you, you're just like me." |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Thanks Kris, Wranx and Deep Thought, for your nice comments on my poem, I am new here, and I like the responce I got so far  Love Light and Happiness!!! Neeraja |
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